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THE PICTURE AND STORY ARE MINE

:iconbelongsplz:© Estefanía V G 2010

Story Published in Spain.

All rights reserved.



Original in spanish: [link]


If you can't read the story, DOWNLOAD the pdf-file, please :clap:




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Translated by: :iconnuevefactorial: :tighthug:


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More:
Rapunzel's Death...... [link]
Peter Pan's Death.... [link]
The River Styx.... [link]
Shh... [link]

Rapunzel The way towards the tower covered always by mist, cold, dark, accompanied by hidden whispers and tangled in between the branches of the night trees: an owl taking flight, the tree branches as voracious claws, whiny wolves and beasts…  If you passed by sometime, the warm blood that goes through your veins would freeze, the ghosts that you hold inside you, those ones that you have locked up somewhere, would come out to devour you; only the dying yells will stay.

At the end of the world, there she was, inside, locked up.

The tower hold itself up over the trees, it was lost in between gray clouds and white snow. That turret was i
Peter Pan s Death  Peter Pan's Death

1. Tinker Bell

It rains, it rains on Neverland. Every drop tells a story that won't ever happen now; every sound a scream that no human could be capable of listening. From the drops' smell confusing memories flowed and, just when they precipitated towards the ground, they exploded with small but effective whispers. Each molecule of water yelled when born: "Peter Pan won't come back".

A black cloud covered the entire island, from the Mermaid Lagoon, Skull Rock, through the Indian Camp, the lost kids' tree, Hangmans Tree, the Cannival Cove, the forest of the fairies… At Neverland no one remembered the warmth of the su
The River Styx Styx - Estigia - Στύξ

My body is burning, lying on a dry oak bed. Everything is consumed gradually.

Father cries my death in between agonizing sobs. All him, big and strong, now with his shoulders shrunken, seems a squalid being, scruffy, so weak… No, father, I won't wake up. You punched my body in the last bed, you took my hand, yellowish and cold, and looked at me, waiting for me to wake up. How many tears, father of mine, how many remain to be shed.

Thank you, father of mine, for the two silver mites you leave on my closed eyes, with them I will pay to the boatman.

Mother watches absorbed the frantic dancing of
Shh... Her breath lethargic, so weak in my arms. Her tears kiss my torso, the golden locks of her hair caress my arms, my fingertips.

She hugs her knees, curled up on herself, while I in turn, hold her in silence. I'm a jerk, I'm insensitive, I can't say anything, I can't offer any single word. And I think: "The silence and nothing more. That I offer to you, and you know, that is why you are here."

And if she breaks in my arms? No, definitely I didn't utter a single word; just moments ago her tears were a desperate flood, whining incessantly, making my body her warm den. Now it has calmed down, her bright black eyes are red, lost, looking out the




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Thanks so much for this honor, makes me very happy.
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Mud by ~lluviosa ( Suggested by STelari and Featured by BeccaJS )
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ninitynine Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Student General Artist
wait, it this like... a pdf?
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lluviosa Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Professional Writer
No, it IS a Pdf filel =)
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ninitynine Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Student General Artist
that's what I meant? didn't know you can sub mit pdf books here
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casilacago Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013
awesome written!!...very visceral and dark, i like it
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by =DailyLitDeviations in a news article that can be found here: [link] Congratulations on your DD!

Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article. Keep writing and keep creating.
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lluviosa Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Professional Writer
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Thanks a lot for reading, I really appreciate your support, it truly makes me happy. I'm honored.
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Michel-le-fou Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Professional Writer
Good development of plot.
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dragondeviant66 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Professional General Artist
I love it :) but I can't see the pic :(
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lluviosa Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Professional Writer
LOL no, the pic is onli for preview :clap:
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ISLeonides Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012
no pude leerlo...
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:iconlluviosa:
lluviosa Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Professional Writer
Quizás no tengas el PDF reader: [link] es un programa gratuito para poder leer PDFs.

De todas formas esta es la versión en inglés, el original español está aquí: [link]

=)
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ISLeonides Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2012
a la uz estan tus escritos pero Mas aya de la niebla y las tinieblas estas tu,
que hay de ti? eres todo un misterio...
Tu Nombre Cual Es..
Cuentame que soy muy curioso
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lluviosa Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Professional Writer
Por curiosidad, cuál era tu nick en Estigia?
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ISLeonides Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
EL MISMO QUE LEES AQUI... ISLeonides

ME DISCULPO POR NO PRESENTARME ANTES , MI NOMBRE ES ISRAEL S. LEONIDES.

ESPERO ENCONTRAR POR AQUI NUEVAS CREACIONES TUYAS.
HASTA LUEGO Y QUEDO AGRADECIDO PORQUE TE TOMASTE EL TIEMPO PARA DIRIGIRME UNAS PALABRAS.

Imaginaste que un día tus letras llegarían hasta algún lugar perdido de México?
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lluviosa Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Professional Writer
Pues la verdad es que sí hay bastantes nuevas, las expongo aquí y en mi blog, espero que te gusten.

No lo imaginé, suelo imaginar lo peor en el caso de mis escritos :clap:
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ISLeonides Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012
Saludos otra vez , desde las tinieblas...

Que ha pasado con † París † ?
la he leído mas de una vez, me ha fascinado.

Deseo te encuentres bien.
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lluviosa Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Professional Writer
Hola!

Vaya, me alegra muchísimo que te gustara tanto, la verdad es que no es una historia demasiado solicitada, a penas tiene comentarios, ni favoritos, así que pensé que no era buena.

De todas formas sigo escribiendo a mano, no he pasado nada más que dos capítulos más, que no he subido en Devianart por falta de motivación.
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Phosphorence Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012
This is so good. Make more :)
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lluviosa Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Professional Writer
Yea, Never stop writing :clap:
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ReygarFaust Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Professional Photographer
Beautiful work! I love you!
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lluviosa Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you so much! =) Thank for love!
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Magical-moments Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Featured on our main page :iconbeyond-borders:
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lluviosa Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Professional Writer
:iconawwwplz: Thank you so much!
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NemoAlleinTraumwelt Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012   Digital Artist
great story ^^
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lluviosa Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Professional Writer
:clap: Thank you for your time!
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NemoAlleinTraumwelt Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012   Digital Artist
it was a real pleasure ... does it happen you write ghost sories... ?
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theGman0 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Hobbyist
really love this writing
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lluviosa Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2012  Professional Writer
:iconawwwplz: Thank you for your time!
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ArgiBerrojalbiz Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Muchisimas felicidades peque. Hace muchisima ilu. A demas es pasada la de gente que ve la obra .Un abrazo
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lluviosa Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Professional Writer
Hola!!!!! GRacias corazón!!! la verdad es que sí! el DD es como ganar un premio xDDD la difusión es aplastante.
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almond-cake Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
uuuuy un dd
felicidades!
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lluviosa Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Professional Writer
Gracias!
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almond-cake Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:onfire: =D
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stitchsmile Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
This was really good!
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lluviosa Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Professional Writer
:iconcocoloveplz: Thanks!
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Android-PeCo Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
That is so beautiful!
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lluviosa Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Professional Writer
:tighthug:
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kaorimaru Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
very tragic...congrats on the dd
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lluviosa Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Professional Writer
Many thanks! :iconcocoloveplz:
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1naynay5 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012   Traditional Artist
This is amazing! I could practically feel her desperation, hope and denial. Please tell me there's more to this story?
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lluviosa Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you so much for feel Helenas Heart. I'm really honored. This story ends here. But if you want read more of my work, you can find in the drescription.
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TheEpicMeow Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
can you say nightmare revisited?
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lluviosa Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Professional Writer
:O_o: Sorry but I don't understand. You mean...
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TheEpicMeow Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
lol it reminds me of the soundtrack for the nightmare before christmas where they redid all the songs
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lluviosa Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Professional Writer
The Nightmare Before Christmas! I Love sally! [link] =)
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SailorMariah Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
So eerie and haunting... it reminds me of this legend about a queen (I'm blanking on her name) who went mad when her husband the king died, and embraced his dead body. A great evocation of insanity and love.
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lluviosa Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you so much for your time! =)
Love is crazy :squee:
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SailorMariah Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2012
You're welcome! I loved how evocative your story was.

And I just remembered the name of the queen -- Queen Juana the Mad of Castile! If you haven't heard her story, I suggest you check it out -- it's really quite interesting.
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lluviosa Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Professional Writer
Yes! Juana I de Castilla, I read a lot of biographies and I love her story. She was crazy, but crazy in love with her ​​husband.
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SailorMariah Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012
Yep, that's the one! :P Your story sounded so much like hers, I wondered if you took any inspiration from it.
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